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Reusable Sections

Eight sections, ready to drop in

Every section in the pack, shown in sequence. Import any one on its own, or combine them into new pages. They all share the same Divi 5 variables and presets.

Section 01

Masthead

Full-bleed hero with a proof rail. Opens any case study.

Theo Marsh × Forge · Messaging Rewrite

Forge, a Homepage That Says One Thing

A developer tool whose homepage listed forty features and named no benefit got a messaging system built around the one promise that made customers sign up.

Forge does a lot, and its old site said so, in forty feature bullets and not one sentence a person could repeat to a coworker. I rewrote it around the single thing customers told me Forge actually gave them.

Client

Forge, developer tooling

Engagement

Messaging and content strategy, five weeks

Deliverables

Message hierarchy, homepage, voice guide

Section 02

Snapshot and Stat Ledger

At-a-glance cards above a documented-number ledger.

Overview

The work at a glance

Where We Started

A homepage of forty feature bullets, three competing taglines, and no single sentence a visitor could repeat. Everyone wrote their own version of what Forge was.

What We Changed

One promise at the top, drawn from how customers describe Forge, with features demoted to proof beneath it and a voice guide so the team stays on message.

What We Measured

I documented the message and the rewrite. Conversion and sign-up lift live in Forge's own analytics, so those numbers stay with them.

Section 03

Challenge Band

The problem stated plainly, beside a source note.

The Challenge

Forty features, no promise

Forge had real fans and a homepage that hid why. The page led with a vague tagline, then buried the value under forty feature bullets written by four different teams. Sales said one thing, the docs said another, and the homepage said everything, which is the same as saying nothing. New visitors could not tell in five seconds what Forge would do for them. The brief was to find the one true promise inside all that capability and build a page, and a system, that says it plainly and proves it.

Source Material

I worked from twelve customer interviews, the support and sales transcripts where people describe Forge in their own words, the analytics on what the page failed to land, and every existing draft of the messaging.

Section 04

Artifact Strip

Three captioned evidence frames in an even row.

Sorted stack of guest inquiry cards with kraft paper sorting tabs

Artifact 01

Customer phrases pulled from interviews, sorted by the promise underneath them

Printed booking screen sheets with pencil annotation marks and sticky flags

Artifact 02

The old homepage, marked up where the message went missing

Open service log notebook beside room detail sheets under a brass desk lamp

Artifact 03

The message hierarchy, one promise above its proof

Section 05

Process Steps

Equal-height numbered steps beside a media panel.

Overhead view of a journey mapping table with note cards grouped into four clusters

In Motion

A motion study stands in for the message hierarchy, building from one promise down to its proof.

The Approach

I found the one promise and built around it

I listened for the sentence customers already used to describe Forge, the one that came up unprompted in interview after interview. That became the promise at the top of the page. Then I demoted the forty features to what they are, proof, and arranged them under the promise so each one earns its place. Finally I wrote a short voice guide, so the next person who touches the copy keeps it on message instead of starting over.

1

Interviewed twelve customers and listened for the repeated phrase.

2

Found the one promise they already used for Forge.

3

Put it at the top and demoted features to proof.

4

Rewrote the homepage around that single hierarchy.

5

Wrote a voice guide so the team stays on message.

Section 06

Evidence Frame

A large interface frame with supporting proof cards.

The Evidence

The message, top to bottom

What I wrote and documented. Conversion and sign-up lift live in Forge's own analytics, not mine.

Bayline House booking page for the Garden King room with details grouped into room fit, stay experience, service details, and confidence notes beside the reservation panel

The Forge message hierarchy as it ships: one promise at the top, features demoted to proof beneath it, and the voice rules that keep every future edit on message.

Decision map diagram showing guest questions, booking screens, and staff notes grouping into four content groups and one booking handoff

Message Map

How forty unranked feature bullets became one promise with its proof arranged underneath.

The Promise

One sentence, drawn from how customers already describe Forge, at the top of the page where it decides whether anyone reads on.

Proof, Not Pile

The features still appear, but as evidence under the promise, each earning its place instead of competing for attention.

What I Did Not Measure

Conversion, sign-ups, and revenue sit in Forge's analytics, not mine. I document the message and the rewrite; the results stay with the client.

Section 07

Quote and Outcome

A reflection closed by a spined pull-quote.

Reflection

A page that says one thing and proves it

Forge now leads with a promise its own customers handed it, and the team keeps new copy on message from the voice guide instead of reinventing it. The page, the message map behind it, and the founder's note below are the record of the work.

“Theo found the sentence our customers were already saying and built the whole page around it. For the first time the homepage sounds like us.”

Founder, Forge

Section 08

Handoff and CTA Band

The design-system pitch and closing call to action.

Inside the System

Built on a real Divi 5 design system

Every color, type size, spacing step, and component on this page is a named Divi 5 variable or preset. Change one and the whole story restyles, so making it yours is an edit, not a rebuild.

Design Variables

Change one color or type scale in the Variable Manager and the entire page follows. Nothing here is hardcoded, so your rebrand takes minutes.

Element Presets

Mastheads, proof rails, evidence frames, quote panels, and buttons all run on named presets. Restyle one and every match updates with it.

Rows That Stay Even

Card rows hold equal heights no matter how long your content runs. Paste your real copy and the layout keeps its shape on every screen.

Ready For Your Story

The sample case study, labels, and images are isolated for clean swaps. Drop in your own work without untangling a single style.